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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2000-04-07 12:32 PM


The moonbeams create
                a halo in your hair,
                softening your features-
                making me stop and stare.

The stars shone bright
                in the cool night sky
                a hue of Yankee blue
                was the color of your eyes.

The reflection off the water
                of a shimmering still pond
                paints the precious picture-
                as if created by magic wand.

The sweet summer breeze
                guides the little lightning bugs-
                The perfect illumination
                of the man I love.

Written 2/16/2000. Dedicated to my love, Richard, for our 5th month anniversary   AGain, i can't remember if i posted this one or not..sorry for any re=peats


 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

© Copyright 2000 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 2000-04-07 01:48 PM


You write beautiful love poetry for Richard! Very lovely!

Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-07 10:44 PM


I don't believe this hasn't recieved more replies. This was very touching, caring, loving and over all beautiful!!!

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Oh, and Happy Anniversary!

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