Open Poetry #6 |
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The Voice of Love--Tara's Challenge |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
Speaking to me in a voice soft and low A voice only once reserved for the angels Love whispers in my ear delicately Telling me of joy and of sorrow Filling my heart with the promise of things to come I hear Love's voice in the wind Whistling through the air and the trees Singing a melody quiet and pure In a warm, comforting alto range Filling my mind with the dreams of another tomorrow I walk every day with the voice of love It echoes through my mind and lingers in my soul The voice that I've sought for so long to hear The voice that makes me weak and sends shivers down my spine The voice of love that speaks to me always . . . your voice. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-07-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You speak the voice of Love so well...breathtaking as always you silver tougned angel. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This is so beautiful, I don't know what the challenge was but you did it with much beauty. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sven! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, your poetic recounting always speaks to my heart. This is lovely. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You little devil you. That you at the end is going to get you alot of answers. Sy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh* Such poetry! So well done Sven.... but then we AF poets know that you are capable of such beautiful work! Excellent! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Sven As always you deliever beautiful poetry filled with intensity. And this was no exception! This is simply wonderful...should be put to music (my opinion). You captured the feelings of love so divinely here. AMY ![]() ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven...lovely poem. Love's voice is beautiful indeed. I think I hear it.... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Your words have been wonderful. . . Please also see Tara Simms' The Face of Love and TerryW's The Eyes of Love for the inspirations to this poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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