Open Poetry #6 |
~Desperate Cry For Love~ |
Ashley2314 New Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 2USA |
The blackness surrounds you, the deep hole your loneliness digs for you. I stand above and watch, unable to break through the bubble that engulfs you. I try to help, to force my way in, so you'll be able to breathe once again the fresh air of love. But you stand and stare glassy eyed, like a worn-out rag doll, as I fight for you. I fight the evils of your life, your anger and your sadness, but I can't get through. I scream for you to try harder, to rid yourself from this awful fate. I don't understand what your mind says as you fall deeper and deeper inside yourself. I can feel your insecurities, your fear, and your loneliness. I beg to help, to fight for you, but you just stand and stare. Defeated, I sit and wait, for you to come back from that dreaded place inside your mind. I weep when you fall, your burdens too heavy to bear. All the while you silently stare, your own desperate cry for love. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hello, Ashley, and welcome to Passions. Your poem very well describes the way one feels when a friend is hurting...I've felt this way so many times before...your friend is lucky to have someone like you! Best of luck to you both. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is powerful and beautiful....What an entrance!!! Welcome!! You are a great addition to our family. I look forward to reading more of your work. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Ashley. This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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