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Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-04-05 06:53 PM


Lately my life had been full,
With tons of stuff to keep me busy
There hasn't been a minor lull
It is starting to make me rather dizzy

School to the left and exercise to the right
There doesn't seem to be an end in sight
No time it seems for writing in verse
The situation only seems to get worse

Right as I get home from school
I read a chapter for English class
Then upon my calculus book I drool
Then to German, nah, I'll pass

Soon its time to eat my dinner
I eat very little, wanting to be thinner
Soon it is time to go to the gym
So I may once again be fit and trim

Once I am home I am tired and sore
Far too weak to write my emotions
I lay down on my bed and snore
So that the next day I can repeat the motions

Again I apologize to all of you for being rather absent lately. My free time has taken a thrashing in the last couple of weeks, and shows no signs of coming back any time soon. I will check in and try to reply to people as much as possible, but I am afraid that wont be much... sigh..

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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-04-05 07:17 PM


lol, I think a lot of us can relate to this lifestyle a lot.  I can at least... I am always busy, but finally seeing the end of things I think.  Hope you see the end sooN!

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-05 10:59 PM


So that's where ya been. At least you're doing productive things right?  Keep on Keepin on...  
Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 2000-04-05 11:06 PM


We ain't going nowhere, Mystik. Come on back when ya can!  
LoveBug
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4 posted 2000-04-06 02:11 PM


Ah, the one thing all teenagers have alike, lack of time.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Denise
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5 posted 2000-04-06 02:36 PM


Great poem!! I enjoyed this!

Denise

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