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ChersKnight
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0 posted 2000-04-05 09:02 PM


I WILL ALWAYS WATCH OVER YOU,

EVEN WHEN I BREATHE NO MORE,

MY SOUL WILL LEAD YOU FROM HARM,

OF THIS YOU CAN BE SURE.

MY LOVE WILL BE ETERNAL,

AND TO YOU IT'S WHO I WILL GIVE,

BECAUSE THERE IS NO OTHER,

WITH WHOM I'D WANT TO LIVE.

AND NOW MY THOUGHTS ARE SPOKEN,

FROM WITHIN MY HEART SO TRUE,

YOU KNOW THERE IS NO OTHER,

MY LOVE IS JUST FOR YOU.

© Copyright 2000 ChersKnight - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-05 09:19 PM


Welcome to Passions, ChersKnight! This is a lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-04-05 09:31 PM


Lovely..has sweet quality.. Welcome to the family!  
SorrowsMystress
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3 posted 2000-04-05 09:34 PM


Boy...some girls have all the luck! (just kidding). This is very beautiful. It's good to know that there's still love like this that exists in the world today. Wonderful! Keep on posting, and I'll keep reading. You've impressed me completely. Welcome to passions...you're gonna love it here!  

 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath

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4 posted 2000-04-05 09:49 PM


Chers~
Welcome to Passion's.
Looks like you've already been to LOVE !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-04-05 10:53 PM



Welcome to Passions!!!
You have captured the all consuming love, this is beautiful.  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Elizabeth
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6 posted 2000-04-05 11:02 PM


Welcome, ChersKnight! A very nice first post--enrapturing!

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


INclan
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7 posted 2000-04-06 12:13 PM


ChersKnight,

Welcome to Passions.  Jump right in...the waters fine. A good first posting, I look forward to reading more of your work.

INclan

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-04-06 06:21 AM


A warm welcome to passions~
Your poem captivates love~
Well done~
Tracie  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-04-06 07:16 AM


Truly written from the heart, as poetry should be
Welcome, dear poet
Liz

Aimster
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10 posted 2000-04-06 09:43 AM


A heartfelt welcome extended to you....welcome to the Passions Family! This was a beautiful expression of love...keep posting, i look forward to reading more from you.

take care,
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2000-04-06 12:08 PM


Welcome to passions...just one little hint, you don't need to use caps here, let your poetry shout for itself  
Martie
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12 posted 2000-04-06 02:20 PM


Beautiful declaration of love, this poem.  Welcome!
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-04-06 03:44 PM


This is the beauty of Love.  James
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