Open Poetry #6 |
Her Eyes Were Made For Crying |
SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
Her eyes were made for crying They withold a soul Which screams of anger They contain a window Into a life Which has shown her no mercy They are mysterious, yet give her away So well Her eyes were made for crying She cries for all of her burdens She cries for others' sins She weeps at the thought of losing Anything she has Her eyes were made for crying They can show you her dispair She can tell you she loves you With just turning them towards you She can say she hates you With her wicked glare Her eyes were made for crying And that's just what she does She cries all night and all day long When will she run dry When will the time come That she can no longer cry? "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely stunning...it is almost as if you've looked into my own heart...I truly loved this! Keep up the great work. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done once again, SorrowsMystress. Sometimes I think my eyes wre made for crying as well... Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Those eyes weren't made for crying~ Put away those blues today~ Those eyes weren't made for crying~ Happiness will find you, I pray~ One day those clouds will break~ Have faith~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SorrowsMystress, WOW girl this is really good, you speak volums to me, I have never been able or granted the chance to turn off the fauset. Some times I think I was cursed with a life of proublems and have no right to happyness. I love the way you write, I look forward to your poetry. Thank you, Cerenity |
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