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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-04-04 11:09 PM

A moments magic

Filigree trees with greenneedle leaves,
Cleave and shadow a moon lit eve.
Spearing thin spears of light in flight.
Sending phantoms into the night.

Dancing in shivers of the breeze,
Fluted and finned by moving trees.
Flashing a wizardry dark grey,
Into shards of elfin at play.

Opens the nights magic of find,
Clears the mind from the black of blind
And by the glory of dispense,
It harps on the strings of your sense.

Fills you with soar and flights of awe,
Flies you into fantasies door.
Places you in the haze of dream
And sweeps you to sorceries seem.

A touch of infinities power
And enchanting as a flower.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-04 11:46 PM

Filigree trees with greenneedle leaves,
Cleave and shadow a moon lit eve.
Spearing thin spears of light in flight.
Sending phantoms into the night.
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Opens the nights magic of find,
Clears the mind from the black of blind
And by the glory of dispense,
It harps on the strings of your sense
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Sy this poem is what is enchanting...perfection of imagery
and so serene, mystical and cryptic.
very well written
take care jm
take care jm

...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-04-04 11:49 PM

Really liked this one... just flows of the tongue when spoken. Like muchly.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2000-04-05 02:57 AM

This poetry reads like music
Your words are magical
Another beauty from the master
Love ya
Liz

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-05 05:32 AM

Seymour~

'Filigree trees'

enough for me ....
such beauteous thought.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-04-05 05:39 AM

Very stylish writing Seymour. James

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2000-04-05 06:04 AM

This carries a purely mystical essance all through, Sy. Wonderful poem.

Michael

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-04-05 12:19 PM

This dances off my tongue

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2000-04-05 01:56 PM

The wording is exquisite and the magic of it will carry me through many days...and nights. Well done [as always] Sy! Thanks!

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2000-04-05 04:10 PM

I have to agree with Marge. *S* This was magic from the first two words! *S*

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