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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The path It depends on the person, time and place It counts on the state, perplexed or graced. It is what I'd call a personal thing. A soul with a goal in winter or spring. As long as it lasts, the magic is cast, Always the future but stems form the past. It circles an aura about each soul, Sending its message and finding its goal. It comes in the day and often at night. Whenever it comes, it's brightest of bright. It colors the mind and it warms the heart, Welds you together or tears you apart. It's the greatest feeling one can declare. Weather heart felt love or complete despair. It's the essence of our being within. Emotional truth, be it good or sin. A door to be opened, our human core. The path and the entry, to evermore. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ So very, very good to see your smiling face.  And the bread crumbs scattered along the path .. leads us home. This is a really thoughtful piece of writing. Glad that our paths have crossed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Marge, Thank you for the quick response. Been up to New York, just got back. I'll have to play catch up. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It comes in the day and often at night. Whenever it comes, it's brightest of bright. It colors the mind and it warms the heart, Welds you together or tears you apart. It's the greatest feeling one can declare. Weather heart felt love or complete despair. It's the essence of our being within. Emotional truth, be it good or sin. A door to be opened, our human core. The path and the entry, to evermore. ----------------- Sy I love this one....its so well written and full of hope and sincerety...VERY nice...very!! take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful poetry you have here. I loved it. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Always the future but stems form the past." Great line Sy. The path for all is different but I think the destination is shared. May all our paths join in the end. Wonderful poem. Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, your paths lead to many thoughts, always provoking. Thank you! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, It's so good having you back, missed your beautiful poetry. This one is lovely Love Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this trail your thoughts took. *S* Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Thank you so much for the read and comment. Temptress, Thank you for the response. Michael, Thank you and I wish you the same. Sunshine, And your so provokable. *L* Elizabeth, Glad to be back. Love ya Sy Suthern, Thank you for the well done. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great poem Sy. . .always love your writing. . . Always makes me think. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you back home Sy.... course it would've been nice to see you while you were up north too.... Nice work here, of course.. Glad you didn't take a break from that..  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully crafted to encourage thought. Well done. "Always the future but stems from the past" reminds of one of my history professors in college... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One thing is for certain...the path that your poems lead me down is always delightful! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Seymour Tabin, This was wonderful, I loved it thank you, Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...but we all have to choose our own paths. Speaking of paths, America agrees with my favorite poem...the favorite poem for this year is The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost...gotta love it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you for the read and comment. Nan, Missed you too, It was not a pleasure trip, wished I could have seen you. *L* Mike, Nice comment, thank you. Denise, You are a delight. *L* Cerenity, Thank you for loving the poem. Hoot, Thank you so much for the nice comment and information. *L* |
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