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~Unjustified Passage~
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~Unjustified Passage~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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“The Kingdom Of God is inside you, and all around you…” Purity in form of the snow-white dove- Innocence in eyes of a doubtless child, Consideration in outstretched palm- Wisdom in the unwavering mind… “I’m not in a house made of wood nor stone…” No building of grandness or rubble- Will ever influence the heart of God. Walls cannot create, nor dictate- The pureness of your believing soul… “Split a piece of wood, and I’ll be there…” That aching wound begging release- On bending knee…believe in me. An open heart will reprimand- Of fallen strength, and fallen man… “Lift a stone, and there you’ll find me…” Awaiting patiently, Timelessly- Forgiveness…you shall see. Come raw and open to me- No longer shall you grieve… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ This is inspiring. Lovely thoughts, lovely feelings. There is a serenity in you that is refreshing to see.  KARMA Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well hun, you certainly bring justice to the unjustified passage. Your last stanza speaks very loudly, here. I know how much this piece meant to you - and I think you've done wonderful with it. Indeed, "Walls cannot create, nor dictate." Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Devina...this is wonderfully creative |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is fantastic! I love it, I love it. Please if you would, when this falls to back pages, have Michael move into spiritual. I'd very much appreciate it, if you'd share with them also. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Purity in form of the snow-white dove- Innocence in eyes of a doubtless child, Consideration in outstretched palm- Wisdom in the unwavering mind… --------------- “Split a piece of wood, and I’ll be there…” That aching wound begging release- On bending knee…believe in me. An open heart will reprimand- Of fallen strength, and fallen man… “Lift a stone, and there you’ll find me…” Awaiting patiently, Timelessly- Forgiveness…you shall see. Come raw and open to me- No longer shall you grieve… ---------------------- devina...girl this is AWESOME... this is SO perfect. WOW...it just glows... this is one you should be real proud of!! take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beautifully written, and in the spirit of the approaching season. Shows another demension of your incredible writing talent. May have penned a masterpiece here, it touches the heart, mind, and soul. "Forgiveness...you shall see Come raw and open to me" DH |
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