Open Poetry #6 |
He Sleeps |
cherluvsdean New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 8 |
To Dean, With Love He Sleeps As I sit here thinking of him He sleeps And I wonder is he dreaming? Is he dreaming of us And all that we are going to do All that we will share Our lives, our love As he sleeps I think about how it will feel Lying next to him Our bodies pressed to each other The warmth of his breath On the curve of my neck His arms around me Holding me tight His chest against my back Feeling the rhythmic beating Of his heart At the very thought of Being next to him My heart races My body tingles I feel that familiar feeling Longing for his touch His sweet caresses And his passionate kisses I close my eyes I feel him near me I feel him inside my soul Where did he come from? This beautiful man before me And am I deserving Of such a love like this I love him completely He is my life, my love, my everything As he sleeps I love you baby, with all my heart Cher |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like a very lovely relationship to me.. Welcome to Passions - We can always make room for another romantic around here.. Check your email for a special greeting.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Cher! Welcome to Passions! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cher~ Sounds like~ Sounds like~ Sounds like love to me~ Lovely, lovely thoughts. Be happy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ That was beautiful~ BRAVO~~BRAVO~~ What a great entrance! Welcome Cher~ Marie~ (Has he read this?) "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I see you made it....and I'm glad you did! Beautiful thoughts.....a big WELCOME to you! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is lovely! |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
You know...I feel the same exact way when I lay down to sleep with my boyfriend. That warm and fuzzy just totally fills me up inside. I love this poem and I will more than likely keep it in my personal archives (A place dedicated to those poets who inspire me, whether famous or not yet known...) so I can look back and always remember what it felt like. Good work and a heartfelt welcome to Passions!!! Hope to see a LOT more from you soon |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***cherluvsdean, (gr8 name btw) this is beautiful, and so true. i feel exactly the same with my boyfriend. an absolutely exquisite first post. well done. welcome to passions...i'll be watching... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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cherluvsdean New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 8 |
All i can say is WOW!!! Thank you all so much for your kind words and for the warm welcome...but i must give credit where credit is due...to the love of my life...Dean...he is my inspiration. I love you Dean. Again thank you all so much I truly look forward to reading the thoughts and feelings of others...i have browsed in here and what can I say but Bravo!!!! There are so many talented people posting here...it's absolutely wonderful Tahnks for letting me share with all of you |
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cherluvsdean New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 8 |
Marie...yes he has read this...i share everything with him... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Welcome to passions, and I will be enjoying your romantic poetry. This one was excellent! Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful description of a warm and tender relationship. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful thoughts...welcome to passions |
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