Open Poetry #6 |
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She Smiles |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
She smiles with sweetest serenity As a tear traces a trail upon her cheek And silver moonlight catches fire The moment is golden treasure in time If only I could remember; to recall With total clarity as such things in reality Fade from mental thoughts to be forgotten But remembered in the heart’s eternal vault It is human to wish for impossible things To breathe with another’s breath And to long for certain moments of quiet peace That, like tricks of the mind, Are sometimes imagined, sometimes presupposed She likes a nice surprise once in a while She likes little things in life that Are easily forced, yet hard to come by She waits for things to work out right and, She waits patiently for me I want to speak with her voice See with her eyes And I want to smile With her smile |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Sounds like she`s a very special person. It would be refreshing to see thing`s thru another`s eye`s. You`ve done an excellent job with your wording here. JML. Thank`s for sharing ![]() Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML- This is certainly a loving tribute to someone who has placed her smile in your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully said! I like this. ![]() |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
All I can say about this poem is that WOW! This poem is really good. She is lucky to have a guy like you. Now only if i was appreciated. ![]() |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Buff, you are appreciated by me for saying such nice things. Thanks. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seems to me someone is very much in love and there's one lucky girl out there somewhere ![]() |
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