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Tumble Weed (Just Being Silly)
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Tumble Weed (Just Being Silly) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Tumble Weed A tumbleweed just passed me by silly thing just said hi. I tried to stop him but he just kept going right on by. He yelled back to me I’m spreading my love around this town, I’ll stop and talk next time around. He’s in a hurry to spread his seeds of joy to all those who do not see the pleasure in a tumbleweed. Silly thing he is, I can’t wait that long for him, doesn’t he know the next time he’s going to be around it will be next springtime in this town. By, Cerenity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cute, sweet poem...nice to see this side of you too..enjoying the whimsy and rhyme. take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Janet, Yes I can be very silly, I must be to write a poem about a tumble weed. I just passed that same weed alittle bit ago and laughed because if it only knew that it was now on the inner net I bet it would stop and chat ha. Thank you for your reply, Cerenity |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, there's a lot that can be read into this light hearted poem. I loved it. I like the ending too, got somewhere else to be do ya? Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
We like silly in this forum. After all the tears we shed it is so refreshing. And this was delightful Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I think you just blew through my town Spreading laughter all around Do not wait until next Spring Tumble again little tumbleweed of sing !  I liked the lightheartedness of this little gem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Michael, You know I did not see the different ways this could go. Liz, Yes you are right we/I do need alittle more sillyness. Marge, You should see the real poor little tumbleweed now he's not going anywere, and I didn't do it. Thank you for your replys, Cerenity |
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