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~Sweet Elation~
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~Sweet Elation~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweet Elation Embraced in this moment, so perfect, so rare, allowing myself this contentment, your gift to share. Music plays softly, the sun is setting slow, my body still tingling ... warmed by afterglow. I can still hear you breathing, whispering my name ... now that you've touched me like this, I'll never be the same. For it is only in these moments, when lovers gently touch... that elation and contentment, can be felt this much. Wrap your body around me, put your lips on mine, take me to the moment ... when hearts and souls entwine. Janet Marie **for my partner in rhyme, thank you for the inspiration, and content. *S* ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ This was an awsome poem~ I could sense and envision this one~ Great job~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WOW, JM this is great. But a moment in time but such a wonderful moment, and wonderfully expressed. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I loved this Janet..especially the very first line..Embraced in this moment, so perfect, so rare. I am trying to pull myself out of my past and live in the moment and enjoy every new moment. Happy to see that you are experiencing some nice ones. James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM--so glad there's enough to go around! Simply Rapturous! My turn now to type Mmm. Mmm. Mmmmmmmmmmm... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, this is a gem.... my body still tingling ... warmed by afterglow..... I really loved that, I think I can picture as soft smile living here. Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet- Yowsers! This was a HOT and ELECTRIFYING piece of work if I ever did see! I really am glad that you are experiencing moments such as these. Oh I loved the title as well. Sure glad I read this one!! Take care love amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Another excellent poem. Your poetry has become a must read for me. So nice. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Janet Marie The title to your poem is exactly what your poem is ~Sweet Elation~ ~Beautiful~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Mmm good! Just like a warm bowl of Campbells Soup. Well, better than that but ya know what I mean. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhhhh .. JanetMarie~ You are cavorting with a romantic muse ! Yahoo !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice... "Entwinement" is such a wonderful word to wrap into a poem, isn't it?..;* |
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