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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-04-03 10:03 AM

Love came in once before
Like a thief in the darkness
That comes through the door
Wrapped in the night it wore,
Still I was neutral to the darkness

Had I known the price love would claim
An offering of all that is bliss
Would I have still remained?
To enjoy the pleasure and the pain,
Still I was neutral to the darkness

Away with love I would send
Falling into the blackness
Those times would never end
Those nights, they would never end,
Still I was neutral to the darkness

Everything changed in my eyes
From the innocence to the sweetness
Blinded by the dark was I
Even if no one heeded my cries,
Still I was neutral to the darkness

Love came in once again
Like a butterfly caress
That feels of angelic skin
And whispers on darkened wind,
And I embraced the darkness

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-03 10:40 AM

Had I known the price love would claim
An offering of all that is bliss
Would I have still remained?
To enjoy the pleasure and the pain,
Still I was neutral to the darkness
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Everything changed in my eyes
From the innocence to the sweetness
Blinded by the dark was I
Even if no one heeded my cries,
Still I was neutral to the darkness

Love came in once again
Like a butterfly caress
That feels of angelic skin
And whispers on darkened wind,
And I embraced the darkness
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wow, I love this one jer, it reads so serene and it goes so deep inside the place where we hide our emotions...very well expressed emotions in this, as always.
stalking you in your depths *S*
your jm

she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20

CherylLynnMckee
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

2 posted 2000-04-03 11:32 AM

I agree emotions expressed well..your poems are always a pleasure to read..really great writing.

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

3 posted 2000-04-03 10:13 PM

beautif poem JML. I love it

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-03 11:01 PM

JML~
This flows so softly through the night.
Very nice piece.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Billy Bolden
Junior Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 23

5 posted 2000-04-04 07:27 AM

JML,
ow talented you are. To feel is to live.
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