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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Last Time Once more I allowed myself too much. Now a dissappointing figure Guides me through the tunnel. I can never reach the light. A walking shadow Ipulsively stalks my presence Disfiguring all that I have loved up to this point. One more time I told myself with such enthusiasm that I cannot deny I have fallen. And now my regrets are massive This pattern is continuously repeating itself And yet I can't break away from the grasp which he holds on me Never again. Never again..... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SorrowMystress, It sounds like you will win this one, just because you have reconized it for what it is and that is half the battle. Welcome to passions Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes we have to learn the same lessons over and over again until we finally get it. Great poem! Denise |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
SorrowsMystress - Nice poem! I especially like the imagery of the tunnel. Sometimes it seems endless, but I have found that there's always a light at the end. Keep up the good work, and welcome to Passions!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sorrows--This is great. And if it helps, I can relate. Love to you, and thanks. |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
Sorrows.... There is One who always understands our repeated lapses. BB |
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