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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-04-02 10:03 PM






Tree of Dogwood cries
Ever-bearing Son Of God
Upon her branches
© ~Marge Tindal~ 2000




© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-04-02 10:08 PM


Nice haiku, Marge! Thanks for sharing. I like the flower, too.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


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2 posted 2000-04-02 10:13 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-04-02 10:14 PM


Even though Elizabeth has weird taste, I like this one too! hehe  

WB


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4 posted 2000-04-02 10:23 PM


Beautiful, Marge.  

~ Claire

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-04-02 10:26 PM


That is the kousa (?) dogwood, almost as lovely as this verse.
Liz

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6 posted 2000-04-02 11:15 PM


Elizabeth~
Very glad you enjoyed.

Denise~
Thank you.

Witch's Brat~
LOL !  Thanks.

Claire~
Thank you, hon.

Elizabeth, my friend~
Thank you.
Glad you enjoyed.

Actually, I believe it is the
Cornus florida L.
Flowering Dogwood

*any botanists out there?

So glad you all liked this little Haiku.
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2000-04-02 11:28 PM



Marge*
I'm afraid my thumb (or all three of them  ) is brown and not green so what ever kind of flower this is it's "purty" and I'm refreshed by your words as is a habit of yours.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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ButterfliesDC~
Thank you, my dear.
We continue the prayers in His name
for Shane.
Love to you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2000-04-03 09:59 AM


Absolutely Lovely!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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10 posted 2000-04-03 12:27 PM


Short and absolutely beautiful..as always!

 

ESP
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11 posted 2000-04-03 03:01 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Marge!!! Thank you for sharing this with us!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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12 posted 2000-04-03 04:36 PM


thank you, the simplicity reflects the beauty even more so  
RAM
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13 posted 2000-04-03 05:50 PM


two lovely blossoms.  thanks.

Rick

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14 posted 2000-04-03 06:46 PM


Marge~

You often reply to a lot of what I write, and I have been meaning to read some of yours.  I wasn't disappointed, it was beautiful.  I'll be hunting down some more.

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*



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15 posted 2000-04-03 07:47 PM


TerryW~
Hi, there.  You know that I'm glad
you read and liked this one.  Thank you.

CherylLynn~
Thank you for replying.
Glad you enjoyed.

ESP~
Thank you.  I felt that it
symbolized the agony that the
Dogwood tree must have felt in bearing
our Lord Jesus.

Corazon~
Thank you.  I've got an increasing
fascination with Haiku.

RAM~
Awwww !  Thank you so much.

DawnEclipse~
I appreciate that you enjoyed it.
Please read more when you can.
~*Marge*~


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16 posted 2000-04-03 08:14 PM


Well, you did it, Marge...came up with a poem which causes me to cast my faint attempts at wit side and just applaud. I applaud.
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17 posted 2000-04-03 08:37 PM


~Marge~
The flower is as beautiful as your heart
~Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Michael
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18 posted 2000-04-03 08:39 PM


Simply beautiful, Marge.  So much said in so few words...  exceptional.


Michael

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19 posted 2000-04-03 09:57 PM


Oh, Balladeer~
Is it any wonder I love ya' so !
You're a dear.

Tracie~
And He has the heart
to love us all.

Michael~
Remembrance of His gift
touches me everytime
I see the Dogwood in bloom.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-04-03 11:27 PM


Marge,

This is a lovely Haiku.  It definitely should be shared with my friends if you don't mind.

Franni

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21 posted 2000-04-03 11:36 PM


Franni~
I would be VERY pleased for you to share it.
It is one of my favorite pieces.
I've printed it and framed it and
given it as a gift to several friends
today.
Thank you for the compliment.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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