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Letting it go
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Letting it go |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Why It's so hard to leave someone whom you love, Why It's so hard to let it go, Whom you love someone so much, Letting it go, It's never been so easy, If you love someone, you feel like crying, you've been trying so hard, not to let your love go, don't want to hurt yourself, but you've to let someone to go from your life, I know, Its not easy to keep , you lose it easily, Letting it go, It's not easy to keep your love that long, And that love was easy to keep, you lose it easily, Letting it go, It's hurt your heart, I know you 've loved someone so much, It's so hard to let it go, Letting it go, |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
'Tis truly hard to lose of part of yourself Vandana... and when you lose someone you love, you lose a special part of yourself. Nicely written. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have put a lot of emotion into this poem And all you say is true Very well done, vandana Liz |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This poem made me think of the saying, "If you love something, let it go; if it comes back it's yours to keep, if not, it was never yours in the first place." There is a lot of emotion in here, Vandana. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Vandana- this held a lot of sadness and yet pure truth in it at the same time. letting someone you love go is probably one of the hardest things a person has to do. but i agree with the quote Elizabeth used...if love comes back to you, then it was meant to be..if it doesn't then it wasn't. i know that doesn't help the heart much when it's hurting..but in time i think the heart heals, at least partially. take care of yourself and thanks for sharing this part of yourself with us. ~Amy~ ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, it does hurt so very much. You've expressed the pain very well. Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Vandana, I too know how it feels to let someone you love go. Your poem is well written and so painfully expressive. Thanks for sharing. Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandana I like the thoughts here...there are certain places in letting go where it seems like the hardest thing in the world..but its not...but we don't feel that way at the time. I'm still trying to let go of someone..it is an ongoing process. We desperately hold on to someone we loved and it keeps us from going on with our lives and really loving the ones we are with now..James |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Vandana, I liked this poem. I used to have problems letting go of love. Whenever I do now, I say to myself that I want him to be happy. I would not want him to be alone and lonely because I love him. Sometimes you can love someone, yet he or she is not right for you. So I agree with jmlee, you have to let go to find the one that is right for you. |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
Vandana A country singer wrote a song called "If it don't come easy better let it go" I've tried to make someone love me before and its like water running up a hill. Let it go girl. bb |
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