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The Kiss |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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THE KISS I never knew how powerful A river’s flowing stream I never knew that so much love Was captured in a dream My heart was not prepared to find The sweetest edge of bliss The greatest of life’s wondrous gift’s Sat poised upon a kiss Nor could I well imagine How succulent the wine I never knew of love’s desires Until your lips met mine Our spirits came together With a kiss’s tender touch Our lips expressed the words That I desired to say so much And now the door has been unlocked For love to wonder through This kiss has opened up The secrets of my heart to you May love now spread it’s timid wings And soar up through the mist A lifelong venture humbly born In the power of a kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...the magic of a kiss wrapped up into the beauty of one of your poems...what a way to start the day  |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Yhis was just beautiful(sigh) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Lizzie~ X X X X's to you. Beautiful, dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
A truly wonderful poem, touched the inner sanctum of my soul....*S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Using my daughters computer, I'll be home sunday night, hope you are well, your poem is just beautiful, as is your mind. Love Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hoot, A sweet comment. Thank you hoot kitkat, Thank you for reading and responding Marge, And XXXX back to you, dear Slashed soul, if it did all that, it was worth writing. Thank you Sy, So nice to hear from you. Glad you found a computer and glad you liked the poem Love ya Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think the kiss is the most intimate entry to the heart and you have found a way to say so with such sweet ardor....lovely! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is the best poem about a kiss that I've ever read! Magnificent!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, Yes I agree with you on the first part of your comment. Thanks for keeping up with my poems while you are away. It's good to hear from you Love ya PDV, Thank you for the kind and lovely remarks Liz |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So very sweet. I loved it--and it made me want to kiss my sweetheart's lips... Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, this is a great poem! I love the subject! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Elizabeth, Sweet comment, thank you Lovebug, a universal subject. Glad you liked it Denise, back on line and catching up.huh Denise? Look at your posts! Thanks for reading and commenting Liz |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Liz, I do so like the way you write  Love the subject too!! mmm kissing is the best! LOL Roniece |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I just had to say that's some kiss... is that all it takes, really..? |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
L~ Suggest you retitle this "First Kiss", now line 1 has a typo (correct it)quickly Line 5 has a misspelled word -surprised you missed it! Line 8 has a word that seems out of place. Line 10 doesn't rhyme at all. Perhaps use a better word instead? Oh, and april fools to you! best regards, bboog [This message has been edited by bboog (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Roniece Thank you for such lovely comments. I appreciate your reading and am glad you liked the poem Lucky, Yep! But it depends on who's doing the kissing I got bbooged again! With my sloppy poet pen It seems he wants perfection And relishes correction But I don't get unglued Whenever I'm bbooged I just say thank you dear And make it very clear There is certainly no mystique On Open six we don't critique I think he knows the rules And now pulls an April Fools And so on his behalf I say thank you for the laugh I don't mean to boost his ego But he is my true amigo Gracias y buenas noches Liz |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
I never tire of reading your work truly none can match thy wit and few thy poetry. Loneheart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Loneheart And none can match thy flattery Thank you for reading and for your generous remarks Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah, Liz, the power and inspiration of a kiss...splendid writing, dear lady. Thank you for this poetic gifting. ~ Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts. I'm looking for some lips right now.....James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, A humble thank you to the eloquent poetess Liz James It has to be the right one. good luck and thanks for reading and commenting Liz |
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Billy Bolden Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 23 |
You can have the silver, you can have the gold. I'll take the kiss of my lover over wealth untold. Liz your work is so fine, like the sweetest kisses I have ever known. BB |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hmm.. How did I miss this one? This is fantastic~ Wish I had someone to share a kiss with right now! Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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