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thebeautybrat
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since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida

0 posted 2000-04-02 08:29 PM


I need some help for a new poem to write,
There were some that I thought that I might...
But I decided they weren't quite right.
Now I'm asking for all of you,
To give me an idea for a poem or two.
And if I like your idea then that poem I will do.
I'm asking you to just give me a title
Then describe it and I'll think for a while.
If I like it I will start to smile.
If I can relate to what you have said,
I'll form a poem inside my head.
Then I'll write it first in lead.
I'll post it in Open Poetry #6
At the end I'll tell who gave me this.

PLEASE HELP ME!!!!
ANY QUESTIONS POST THEM AT THE BOTTOM OF THIS PAGE!!
ANY SUGGESTIONS FOR A POEM FOR ME TO DO???
POST THEM AT THE END TOO!!
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR TIME!!


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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
1 posted 2000-04-02 08:47 PM


Ahhh... ideas , where do they come from , what do they mean ?
Who first decided , that grass should be green ?
Pick something you feel , and take it from there
For us to be choosing , would be grasping at air.

Best of luck ...
Doc

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2000-04-02 09:01 PM


Inspiration is all that is needed.
Try the most crimson red, divided by two shades of black, minus an eternity..
I havent writen one of those in a while.
I dont know, man, improvisation brings enlightenment.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-04-02 10:44 PM



By the candel burning bright
I answer to your plight
An idea just for you
A wish I grant to you.  
Close your eyes envision your dream
That is the pathway of the scene.  

Take care and good luck!  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-04-02 11:36 PM


Try looking in poetry challenge for something  
thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
5 posted 2000-04-03 02:47 AM


thanks for your replies
but i am still stumped
i guess my head isn't
as full as usual.
oh well keep replying
and maybe i will find  
what i am looking for.
thanks again and i will
keep reading your replies!!!

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
6 posted 2000-04-03 06:58 PM


PLEASE HELP ME!!!!
~~~LOVE~~~

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-04-04 09:15 PM


Just write what you know
and let your heart show
from that seed, an idea will grow
and then your light will glow


Good luck. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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