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My William James
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My William James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This isn't my usual "style" but it's pouring out this way, so please forgive the simple form and language...today I learned that my dear friend, Bill, has died, and because of his family's deep resentment about his thirty year relationship with my mother, who died eight years ago, my family will not be welcome at his memorial services. Bill was a widower when he met my mother, and he soon became part of our family. I cannot remember life without him. After so many personal losses, recently, these words are just coming out. I can't reach anyone to talk with, so I'm sharing with you all, as I feel that you will accept the emotion. thank you. My William James Not my father by blood, but by heart's beating breath You've left me for Heaven as I learn of your death Thirty years we have shared and each day I remember you were always so kind, Bill, so deliberate and tender Your hands were the largest and most gentle I've seen, holding, tender, my heart taking care with my dreams All the years playing back through blurred vision today Your quiet presence, sweetened laugh knowing just what to say To a troubled young girl who had so much inside You gave all of yourself patient love, truth and pride As much as Mom loved you I, too, loved you Bill I admired and respected your strength and your will Your loving regard and kind care, easy ways brought a comfort to all of us through so many dark days When our family was churning you were always right there So supportive, ever present, always showing you cared How can you be gone, Bill? What now will I do? So many I've lost, now I'm lost without you. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Claire--This is a beautiful tribute--I'm sure that he sees how much you care and knows the place he had in your life...Hugs to you, my friend...they are missing a special lady at his services. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beautiful claire....wonderful tribute to a wonderful man. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, Its the simple words that say the most. You should make your visit after they have gone, he will wait there for you. I'm sure, a loving spirit always does. Parker |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Claire, you will have an extra angel watching over you tonight. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, He came into your life it seems for a wonderful purpose, to love and be loved. I felt the love in your poetry. A beautiful tribute Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Claire, this is so beautiful. Your heart shows clearly in these touching words. I will keep you and Bill in my prayers. A wonderful tribute this was. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Clair I love the style you used as these feelings poured out of your heart. Just as the Heavenly Father is embracing William in heaven I pray that he will embrace you and take you in his arms and love you and comfort you. Take care, James |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
This is so touching and heart rendering. I feel for you... and I will say a prayer. Z |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so heartbreaking and beautiful, Claire. You have my deepest sympathy. This is a wonderful tribute to him. Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The simplicity of your verse is very appropriate - It reflects your feelings perfectly - pure and simple love... very nicely done.. God Bless... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, this is indeed beautiful. . . he did indeed make an impact on your life, and a positive one at that. . . It's amazing how people can be jealous of the friendships that we make along the way of life. . . much strength and love to you, my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I'm so terribly sorry for your loss! My heart and prayers are with you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is such a touching tribute. My thoughts are with you at this time of loss. |
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