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Silhouette Of Fire
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Silhouette Of Fire |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Allow me to watch shadows dance in silhouette of fire. Allow my fingers-- trembling tips-- butterflies that kiss desire. Deny me not my ache for you. Permit me, please, my need to savour... Let it be sweet, in pure relief, releasing dam of God's Good Favor. Be gentle as I take my time, ponder possibility of rhyme... A thousand years, a million tears, I've waited for your voice, sublime... How startling, it is to see all I've believed that could not be standing right in front of me in ashes of myself despised... So simple. And I am so surprised. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Allow me to watch shadows dance in silhouette of fire. Allow my fingers-- trembling tips-- butterflies that kiss desire. -------------- How startling, it is to see all I've believed that could not be standing right in front of me in ashes of myself despised... So simple. And I am so surprised. -------------------- mmm, mmm, mmm, my- my -my...what possibly could I say in follow up to THIS...that could even remotely attempt to compare...Im NOT even gonna try... Im gonna take my BAD case of POET ENVY and just go to bed...with the visions of this EQUISITE... PERFECT... poem in my head...  sweet dreams my sweet serenity(smile) take care, jm some things are worth staying up for...(smile) she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Serenity, This is OUTSTANDING! I hope your inspiration survived (just kidding). Very well written. I can feel the fire.... Oh, my...I think I need a smoke. INclan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
serenity ... you sent the tingles up and down my spine and guess where it stopped  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL@Rex's reply...naughty boy you Serinity, this is breathtaking |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
this is very sensual and very well written smoldering passion splendid gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Serenity! Very lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is a lovely piece of work. I enjoyed your feelings. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie, my new buddy-thanks, as always your support means much to me. INclan--thank you. Oh, and smoking is really bad for you! (Serenity types in a cloud of smoke as she exhales...) Rex Allen--sorry, I guess I did go on and on and on...) Thanks to you! gemini shadow--thank you, am looking forward to seeing your work in the future. Denise--words cannot express my gratitude... Marge--what a coincidence! I enjoyed the feelings too! Much gratitude to all, now I'm off, in search of ahem--INSPIRATION... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh I loved this, what a story you did tell, and the ending...so perfect |
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