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Open Poetry #6

eyesplus2
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-04-03 06:13 AM

                   If
     If  I give you my Heart
                will you take it

           If  I give my Life to you
             will you share it with me

               If I give you my Love
      my very precious of all things to give
                 will you want it

         if I give you all these things
              will you give me you……..

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-04-03 06:32 AM

***eyesplus2,
Your work is very special.
It is simple, yet so very effective.
My love and best wishes are with you.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-04-03 07:34 AM

Eyes~
Nice gifts ...
Hope the answer was yes.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tickle tickle
New Member

since 2000-04-03

Posts 7

3 posted 2000-04-03 06:04 PM

if only.....so no, no, no, but definitely yes
i loved this poem from yoour heart

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