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In You I See.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
When I look at you I see a man who is Strong, caring, proud Whose true beauty comes from within To me you are handsome In every way; inside and outside The depth of your compassion At times amazes me For it is unusual to see Such soft things in a man They do not mean you are less Masculine, protective, brave Just that you are more in tune With your emotions and feelings Than most men are This has made you a sensitive creature Who should be shown love Support, encouragement, and care All those qualities that you possess Are wonderful indeed They are a part of why I fell in love with you So many years ago You are a rare find A treasure to behold Very special to me Now and always Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
ahh, what a touching and sweet poem written for the man that you love. Have you shown this to him yet? I am sure that he would melt.  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful thoughts Lone wolf ... be sure to show it to him Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ This is a strong affirmation of love. Nice to see your thoughts. I'm sure he knows how you feel. I would think you show it first ... and then write of it. When the heart writes ... it's a good thing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Yes, he has seen it and he did melt. Thought it was very touching. I do love him with all my heart and soul. Thank you!! Rex, Thank you and he was the first to see before I posted it. Marge, Yes, he knows. Try to show it every day of my life. I feel very lucky to have found such a special man. He is my love....old, new, happy, sad, through the good and the bad. My heart writes a lot....not always happy, but it is always there. Thank you!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such loving and sincere words, Lone Wolf. You are both blessed, it is clear. Beautiful thoughts here...thank you for sharing this. ~ Claire |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, Thank you and yes we are blessed. It took us some time to realize that, but we are starting over with a fresh slate. You are welcome on the sharing....my pleasure. ---------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem,I like it very much.!!!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful!! Are we married to the same man?! LOL Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana....thank you. Happy you liked it. Denise....thank you, but to me he is the beautiful one. The same man? Is that where he's been?? LOL. ------------------------------------------------ Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
lovely poem lonewolf...straight from the heart...the best kind. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Lone Wolf** Beauty and style....well done!! Long ago I thought the "tougher..cockier" a man was the more of a man he was...I've grown up just a bit and have realized that a real man knows his heart and uses it What a lucky man...to have you to tell him how wonderful he is!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very touching, loving and sincere. The love pours out in your words, and I'm sure any man would melt at a verse such as this Lovely Liz |
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