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To Franni.........a Sonnet
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To Franni.........a Sonnet |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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If I had but one final word to say, One word to speak with my last dying breath To all those there beside me as I lay Awaiting still, cold open arms of Death.. Your name would be the one word I would choose To put my life in introspective view. You are my inspiration and my muse. I am a better man for loving you. Then, as I bid the current world adieu As my God comes to stake his final claim My final thoughts will be of loving you My final breath will whisper out your name. These words you may rely upon as true. My thoughts will ever be of loving you. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful sonnet, and beautiful sentiments expressed here. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WOW!!!!!!!!! this is beautifully written Balladeer - a wonderful poem. Roniece |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautiful sonnet! I think you are on a roll! What a beautiful poem for the love of your life! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is now my favorite of yours, my friend. Your heart shines in this one! Absolutely beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ This is beautiful. I'm sure she loves it and you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Scuse me, Deer.....  Hey Franni Shhh.....Don't tell him I said this, OK?.... You're one VERY luck lady..  Deer.... I think this is an absolutely wonderful sonnet.. I do, I do.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Balladeer You're a very lucky guy!!  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Franni, So lovely is she and so desrving of a beautiful sonnet from the golden pen Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Elizabeth...thank you VERY much for commenting.  Roniece...I appreciate your WOW. Thank you. Denise...Kaiser or rye? hehe. I always appreciate your kind words! deVine one...my poem is honored to hold that position. Marge...She better or I ain't taking out the garbage!! Nan...if she doesn't know it, it's not because I don't remind her every day!....and I KNOW I am. Liz...what's this about an olden pen? huh? Oh, golden! Thank you, Ms. Santos! [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Having met Mike and Franni...I know his words are true...and a luckier couple there could not be..Warm and loving is our Balladeer...and a wonderful "lady" dwells at his side. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh...guess that's the end of the jet... ~sulk~  This is absolutely wonderful work 'deer. Marvellous in fact. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beauty in thought and word, Balladeer...so very loving. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You express you love beautifully! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awww Balladeer! These words are so sweet! Glad to see this side of ya! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh....I'm sure this brightened her day. How terribly sweet and romantic |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh sooo beautiful .... just like Franni is .... I, too , like this side of you 'Deer ..... Wonderful !!!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
such a sweet, loving tribute, Balladeer. She's a lucky gal. And I suspect, you're a lucky guy, too. Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very beautiful sentiments, very beautiful writing |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Okay, 'Deer one... no jokes, no wisecracks. *S* You've finally found a way to stop my sense of humor in its tracks... by writing a poem so lovely and loving I can only applaud. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing and so nice to have someone special to write about. James |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Ahhh..sounds like Sir Balladeer has been smitten! You old rascal you! This is beautiful. |
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