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The Land of Dream
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The Land of Dream |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Do you know the time of night, ...just before the dawn? When parents sleep and children dream, ...of fairies on the lawn? When night and day are one the same, ...and dreams come ever true? Then take my hand and fly with me, ...up to the heavens blue, Amongst the stars and comets bright, ...unto the land of Dream, Where hate and fear are unknown words, ...and love is all supreme, Where pain and drugs are make believe, ...and unicorns are real, Where happiness and tenderness, ...are all you ever feel, Where floods and storms just don't exist, ...and clouds are sweet whipped cream, Will you take your hand in mine, ...and fly to land of Dream? [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mike! Take me there! You poem envoked such longing in me for that splendid place.. how do you do it? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hey, I want a ticket to that place to while you're at it Mike. That was so beautiful. i could actually picture in my mind the place that you described. you are an awesome and very gifted writer. thanks for sharing this with all of us! take care, AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I always get the same feelings when I read your Poems, acute admiration followed by severe bouts of jealousy. Thanks for the chance to read and reply Craig Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
In the land within your dreams I reach out for your hand And safe within the dark of night We'll fly to distant lands We'll sail beyond this mortal world To where suns always shine Leaving all our cares behind With your hand there in mine In the confines of your dreams My friend, just you and I Will drift through time and space alone Till daylight fills the sky Nice poem Mike...inspiring |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
Climbing aboard here |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - Oops.... Me too...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike, I want to go too...any night will do..errr, or all...gosh what a beautiful poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Mike! I'm coming along too! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thanks so much for the comments. There's plenty of room, so "All Aboard!" |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thanks so much for the comments. There's plenty of room, so "All Aboard!" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This seems to have been written by a child at heart, and if a child could write as beautifully as this, imagine all the wonderful, wonderful poetry we would have, just as this one. A magical place decribed by Mike's pen is a truly amazing world. Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Soft on wings of faerie I flit through dreams so merry On clouds puffed with whip of cream I'll place a bright red cherry Then with spoon of moon we'll feast on such delight In the land of endless dream on this lovely night Wonderfully light and inspiring, thanks Mike. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is really nice...your poetry has a way of soothing me when I'm frayed and frazzled. LOL Your words are beautiful and lulling...I once new a place like this, and I too, once flew. Thanks for taking me back... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh, Mike, this is absolutely beautiful...I loved your poem and the Land of Dream sounds like it is the place to be...wish I could get there someday. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Liz, my children are always telling me I need to grow up (I hope I don't) Thanks so much Marge, Femme and Elizabeth... btw Elizabeth, it isn't hard to find, you just have to look in the right location... just find a small child and listen... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Mike, I love this. ~ Claire |
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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
yay..... What I would do to make that fantasy world our reality now! Maybe we all will! Maybe, we all are ... Beautiful poem, Mike ...  |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Beautiful poem..the images are lovely..simply divine!!! |
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