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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I hate the way she rolls her eyes!!!! I hate the way she ignores my telephone calls!!!!! I hate it when she stands me up!! I hate it when she leaves me alone!!! I hate not knowing where she is!!!! I hate not being there for her!!!! I hate the way she doesn't show she cares!!!! but ohhh............when she smiles at me!! [This message has been edited by Collins (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a very interesting piece. Love to see more work from you. Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart. *Cassie Roseen* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love can be that way, can't it? For a title how about 'When She Smiles'? Denise |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Its amazing what we let people get away with when we love them..nice piece collin. |
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TravisK New Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 8England |
Ah the joys of romance !Nice,thanx Take care , Travis Kennedy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Collins....so easy to have conviction until they are looking you in the eye......"I don't care if he ever calls again....GOTTA RUN.....The phone is ringing"....Well done  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Collins~ Ahhhh ... the enigmatic smile. Gets 'em everytime ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
thanks for you kind replies. |
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