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Poem for the disregarded.
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Poem for the disregarded. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Disregarded. A good night sleep cannot sooth my heart, 'nor a hearty meal restore my parts!!! For I am lost within myself, For I am resigned back to the shelf. Love only brings heartache and thats the truth, If you need more convincing i'm your proof. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
To some degree..were all proof of that..you write here what we all have felt,to many times in are lives.Very nicely done! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Collins, We have all been there at one time or another in our lives, but remember.....nothing ventured, nothing gained. Very heartfelt message.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You are singing to my soul and making my heart break for your pain. Your poetry is painfilled and raw with emotion. **Angel Wing Hugs** |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
There's always a negative for every postive. Everything in life has it's hurts. But without that hurt you'll never appreciate the joy it can bring. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Thankyou everyone. It means alot. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I thought that I had better read this one, it tells so much truth, I feel like that at the moment, it isn't the not geting your way thats hurtful, it's the fact that there is nouthing that you can do about it, that was a great poem, can you read minds ? because you have just written my thoughts down to every detail, Wounderful . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Thank you angelswing. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Collins, Another fine piece from you. Raw is indeed the word. I love this because although it is introspective in alot of ways, so many peole can relate to it. Well done!  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Thanks bud. #  ) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think that shelf is mighty big...a lot of us are with you there! Good poem.  |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
i wish i wasn't!!! |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
nite everyone. |
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