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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-31 04:15 PM


You tell me that you love me
and this time I believe you.
But still i have some questions for you.
Do you love me like I want you to?
Do you think about me during the day?
Do you worry about me when I'm away?
Do you want to hold me close at night?
Do you want to see me in every mornings light?
Do you dream about if I was there?
Do you think of all that we could share?
Do you want forever for us to be?
Is this the way that you love me?




[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 04-01-2000).]

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-03-31 04:27 PM


This poem made me all tingly! I love it. I hope your loved one loves you in the way you desire. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-01 07:36 AM


Hi just-another-fe,

You said alot that I ask myself about my husband and what he thinks because he DOES NOT communicate period.

Thank you,  Cerenity

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-04-01 08:00 AM


This is wonderful...always nice to make sure the definitions of love match.   James
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