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The girl behind the mirror
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The girl behind the mirror |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
this is a poem for any lonely teeen i look in the mirror and what do i see i see a girl that is not me i look in the mirror and wonder who is that girl i see the one that is not me i look in the mirror i see a perosn who used to have a name i look in the mirror and i see a girl who has changed i look in the mirror and i see a girl who is not me i look in the mirror and i see a girl i whish i could be i look in the mirror and say who is this girl this girl that is not me who is this girl that i whish i could be who is this girl the girl that is not me. [This message has been edited by star 15 (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Oh sweetie this is wonderful and so sad. I recall being this teen...heck I think I'm still this adult! If you ever need someone to talk to I listen well, e-mail me anytime! Welcome to Passions, **Angel Wing Hugs and Butterfly Kisses** |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think you have made a good effort with a theme that most teens struggle with while trying to find themselves in this world. A comment or two if you don't mind. The expression could have been better except for some spelling errors and omitted words. May i suggest you try the review screen before submitting to correct some of these areas in the future. I think you have a writers imagination and I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions. You'll find a lot of nice people here. Best regards, [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Finding yourself is something that many people struggle with well into adulthood. Welcome to Passions. |
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