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My Sin
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My Sin |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
My SinThis longing, I need now impart as words of love leap to my heart. In cadence with yours, sweet, my love they fall from heavens high above. Is it sin, this ache, this bliss? If sin it is, then I have kissed with sinful lips and loved, unwise, with sinning heart and sinful eyes. I cannot keep from touching you whether love or lust or sin is true. I feel the passion's pearling rise and see it mirrored, love, within your eyes.  Claire |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Oh, Claire, I really like this...you have out done yourself. Very well written. HUGS, INclan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You write of love with such sweet passion...so very lovely! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Any expression of Love that beautiful is not sinful! About the time i think i am a poet, i read something this beautiful and realize i have a LONG way to go. So well written and so thoroughly enjoyed. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem!! Such intense passion! This is just great! Thank you for sharing it with us. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
truly, truly sensual... very nice MM... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Your best poem i have read! Then again, i like sensuality. This one is so sexy. And so beautiful! You are too much. *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
C, this is exceptional, and I swear you wrote it from my hearts view...I relate to this so much these days... amazing as always.... jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I am immeasurably grateful to you all ~ your words are so very touching to me. I must admit, I had a special kind of inspiration with this little poem. Thank you, in earnest, for reading. ~ Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Claire. Very well expressed! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Denise, thank you. You always take time to read the work I post here, and I so appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  ~ Claire |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed would be a wee bit of an understatement. Your ability to infuse such passion into the beauty of your words cannot be a learned trait, it has to be gift. Beautifully expressed |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Well, I've been there, so I can relate. I thoroughly regreted that, but enjoyed this. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely... articulate... well crafted! Wonderful! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mike...thank you. The gift, in my view, is to be able to share some of my work from time to time with the likes of true artists such as yourself. You know how I love your work. Thank you for reading this one. pen of passion...thank you for reading and letting me know what you think. Glad you enjoyed this. Doreen...thank you for such an encouraging response. ~ Claire |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Another beautiful poem Claire Rex}>{{{{o> |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I see much passion here, but very little sin. |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
WOW, ok im new here but i have to say that is one of the best poems i have ever read! it was great! i really really look forward to more from you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ If this be sin ... let me in ! Your inspiration had to be special to illicit these beautiful thoughts. Lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sweet, evocative, gentle -- yet yearning. Wonderful. Mike |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how I admire your poetry, Claire This is so exquisite in it's sound and it's sentiment. This is both passionate and beautiful. Your talent overwhelms me Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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