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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-31 04:02 PM

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-03-31 04:11 PM

This is a lovely piece of poetry. I too believe that heaven is to come. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-31 04:59 PM

If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea
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For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

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this is beautiful and so tender...
SO perfect for the way I'm feeling right at this moment(smile)...
its so nice to know a little heaven here on earth.
stalking you in contentedness,
your jm

she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

3 posted 2000-03-31 05:26 PM

Beautifully written JM. You have such a way with the words that elude so many.

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-03-31 05:58 PM

Beautifully written, spoken, a lovely sound.

Love your title here...

~ Claire

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