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Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

0 posted 2000-03-31 06:05 AM

Two worlds set apart
But so close in heart
I can't see your eyes
But there are no lies
I know you are real
your soul I can feel
No need to tell tales
Friendship never fails
Tell me about you
I know you'll be true
I'll not judge what's said
I'll no be mislead
So walk along free
Getting to know me
Listening, sharing
dreaming and caring
That's what friends are for
who could ask for more?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-03-31 06:09 AM

Wonderful writing...very warm and sincere...James

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

2 posted 2000-03-31 06:16 AM

***Butterflies,
This poem is so, so beautiful.
I'm not literate enough to put it into words.
You are amazing. Wow.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-03-31 06:19 AM

This is a lovely poem, Butterflies. I can't say how I feel about it beacuse I don't know beautiful enough words to say it.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:29 AM

JML*Thank you so much for reading and posting, your words mean so much.

Mete* & ESP* you two have me blushing...but all the credit goes to the one who created this within me...Thanks to Eagle I'm glad you both enjoyed it. **Angel Wing Hugs**

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 03-31-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-03-31 08:56 AM

Two worlds set apart
But so close in heart
I can't see your eyes
But there are no lies
I know you are real
your soul I can feel
No need to tell tales
Friendship never fails
------------------

butterfly...I LOVE this...
i love seeing this side of you.
what a perfect sweet poem of the heart.
and there is nothing like the feeling of a soulmate found...
your butterfly graphics are way cool girl!

like Butterfly kisses on every reply
take care, love ya, jm

she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

6 posted 2000-03-31 09:03 AM

This poem was so nicely written~
You have a wonderful talent~
(I love your butterflies, too!)
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2000-03-31 09:35 AM

Butterflies.....You have left me speechless with this one. The credit I think is yours, for you have such a talent and speak from the heart.
To be seen with the heart, no one could ever ask for more......

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

8 posted 2000-03-31 04:34 PM

J.M.* You deserve Butterfly kisses my friend   This flowed alot easier than what I thought...lol I can write happy stuff...woooo hooooo.  Your turn...lol

Marie* Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments

Eagle*  You said alot for being speechless...lol    You inspired a new road for my poetry and for that I thank you!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2000-03-31 08:07 PM

Nice poem!!!!!!!

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