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This Vow I Make
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This Vow I Make |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
From this day on.. I'll let you lead the way.. Be not my deciever..and lead me astray.. This leap of faith I give to you.. My loving benefactor.. I'll follow you in love.. From the beginning to the end.. This trust I give to you my friend.. From my days first breath.. To my last exhale of death.. Threw each and every test.. Forsaking all the rest.. As long as you can see me..and all my faint lines in between.. From all the reaches of my heart.. Every broken part.. This soul in disarray.. So many times betrayed.. I promise from this day..to let you lead the way.. I'll follow you threw our tomorrows.. Eluding regretts and sorrow.. Teach me to forgive.. Show me how to live.. Waistlands in my past.. Faith that didn't last.. Scriptures in the book.. So often overlooked.. A daunting task you undertake.. Took my thirsty heart.. Replenished it again.. Washed away my sins.. Found the beauty held within.. To these ends.. I am ready to begin.. I'll follow you in love.. Completely..all the way.. Each and every day.. From this moment on.. Forever and beyond.. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
sounds like ready for the alter vows to me very nice Cheryl  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Thanks Rex...but be assured I am not headed for the alter by any stretch of the imagination..LOL |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) CLM* Style, grace, beauty, devotion....all rolled into one breathtaking poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I'm touched by the words and the message. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Thank-you so much butterflies that means so much to me. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
you have some lovely lines in here.... thirsty heart...soul in disarray great poem "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Thanks Tess I appreciate that..I have had this piece for along time..I only posted it at my sisters urging..I didnt think it was very good. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"From all the reaches of my heart,From every broken part" came this heartfelt and touching poem. Full of love and well done Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CherylLynn~ Lovely thoughts on display. 'From this moment on.. Forever and beyond..' *Sighs* at the thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Cheryl! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cheryl....this is fabulous!!!! Such heartfelt promises filled with hope of what could be. Thank you for posting it!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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