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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
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England

0 posted 2000-03-31 09:38 PM


Across the waters from this land,
to a girl called Kelly - I give my hand,
I'll pick her up when she is down,
I'll be there when no-one's around.
The friendship I give to you, as absolute and true.

I'm your knight in armour,
I'll make it safe to cry.
wipe the tears from your cheeks
never say goodbye.

In the night, the pouring rain,
I'll hold you tight, I'll kill your pain.

Look into me, and see....I am
your destiny.

-Rich


© Copyright 2000 RJEHKing - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2000-03-31 09:49 PM


oooh Rich, she is a lucky girl! I hope she knows this.... you write a nice poem - thanks for sharing it     Roniece  
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-04-01 04:39 PM




This is so touching...a gift to what must be a very special lady to release such beautiful feeling from you.  I loved it and I'm sure she will.

Elizabeth
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3 posted 2000-04-01 07:14 PM


She sure sounds special for you to write a poem as nice as this to give to her...

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-04-01 09:07 PM


A very very sweet pledge from the heart...sounds like you've got it pretty bad yourself...lovely m'friend.
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-04-01 10:19 PM


Rich....Looks like Kelly is very lucky indeed to have such a pledge given to her.  How romantic and sweet!!  Great job!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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