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When We Make Love...
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When We Make Love... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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When we make love, the gates will open wide To treasures I had never come to know And I will live with happiness inside Delighting in the richness of your glow. When we make love, all pain will disappear Erased by all the joy you make me feel. Our day of blissful joy is drawing near To taste the nectar our love will reveal. When we make love, our hearts and souls will blend As essences now mingled into one. Toward Heaven's path my spirit will ascend To harvest golden apples of the sun. Should fate decree we'll not taste passion's thrill Rest easy knowing I will love you still. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, TOE ! *The devilette made me do it !  She did ! ! ~*Marge*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautifully romantic, deer, and so full of love. I love all you write, but this romatic stuff gets to me.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh my goodness...Oh m'dear Balladeer! now THIS, this, is FOREPLAY! (And Marge is being naughty now! See what you've done?) Exquisite. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooohhh, our sweet Balladeer has caught the spring fever thats blowing around in here. and he is GLOWING with the passion fever. this is so lovely...very tender and romantic. another side of you to enjoy... you devil you  take care, jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So ... what books have you been reading ? obviously from a part of the library that I've never been to Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ladies (being Martie, Serenity and Janet Marie) I thank you ver much for your nice thoughts. Marge....I think the deviled egg made you do it!! I've gotten several hands for my poems but never a toe!!  You crack me up!!!!!!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's in the back corner section, Rex, and you gotta be 18 or older!  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I have to agree with my sis here...tis foreplay Deer...now to adult with you!!!LOL Seriously- this is very sensuous and...well...just plain GOOD!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nobody does it better.... simply one of the best you've written.  |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
 EGAD man! I think my heart just stopped! Warning, lol...I need a warning before reading something this wonderful! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very romantic, Balladeer. Wonderfully written piece. Michael |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Balladeer, You got me all choked up! Beautiful.  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Flipping heck Bal...What were you thinking of?...ooops, don't answer that...hmmm HUSG ps: I think you should have kept the secret of when Deer meets Rainbow cause it's sure to explode the mind, I mean beat the time when the fox did...oooops..*g* [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Be still this beating heart....what a lovely, romantic sonnet Balladeer. Wonderfully written |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
well penned, for sure, Balladeer. thanks for posting it. Rick |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beauty and pleasure in word and thought. Wonderful writing, Balladeer. ~ Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful sonnet Beautiful thoughts Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Here I am, all choked up from reading such a beautiful poem... and wondering how I could respond when I simply wanted to keep reading. And then... and then... and then along came Marge!!! LOL (I will expect her at my office by the close of business today to clean up the diet coke that shot out my nostrils! LOL) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This really touched me--beautiful work! And just when I thought you couldn't get any better! Marge...you naughty girl-just how much time HAVE you spent in Adult? Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You've made this gal's heart melt, Sir .... This is too beautiful .... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How could she not, Balladder, how could she not. Corinne |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Poetic friends, I thank you all for the encouragement. This may be the first sonnet I've ever written. It's that darned David2's fault for showing how beautifully the form can be used. Thank you again. Rainbow....how your colors glow! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Sounds good go me... could we shoot a game of pool first? LOL Seriously, Michael, this is lovely verse. You are so very talented. doreen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I was going to ask you if this was the first sonnet you had ever written, I didn't remember you ever posting any before. This is so beautiful, Balladeer. Ya done real good!! Write some more! Denise |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Wish that lucky lady was me! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Up, up and away, Deer!!! Now aren't you glad I pulled you outa that there pit?? I surely am...  Hey Cinderella - Nice to see ya - I thought maybe you had turned into a pumpkin or something!! |
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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
Balladeer SAUCY have to keep my wife away from this one! |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely.."to harvest golden apples of the sun"...beautiful poem! |
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