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Dream My Fantasy....................From # 2 I think
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Dream My Fantasy....................From # 2 I think |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Dream My Fantasy Can you hear me calling In your dreams tonight Together we are falling Softly towards the light Can you feel me reaching out Through this dreamy mist You are mine beyond a doubt Relax, do not resist Can you feel my kisses Upon your lips so tender I am here to grant your wishes If only you’ll surrender Feel my hands glide on your skin Your flesh becomes alive If only you will let me in There’s nothing I’d deprive I am but a temptress Here to invade your soul Give in to me, let me posess You're no longer in control I will be your dreams at night Feel my many powers And when you rise with morning light I’ll seize your waking hours Feel my breath upon your ear In gasping, heated sighs You can feel me oh so near If you’ll just close your eyes Feel me standing next to you Longing for the night When in your dreams I’ll come to you As fantasies take flight Close your eyes and be with me My passion’s growing stronger Together in your dreams we’ll be I can wait no longer The time has come for us to be Darkness has dimmed the skies Love like no other, you will see If you’ll just close your eyes There are only two ages of people...living and dead and you all look about the right age to me :) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! This is soooo beautiful, Ruth! Thanks for reposting it! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, Ruth this is a fabulous poem.  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ok my eyes are closed!!  wow Hottie.. very very sensual...makes me proud to have feathers.... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Glad I didn't miss this one this time. Only wish my eyes would focus a little better...perhaps I will re-read it when I'm not so dizzy...but then again...perhaps it no one will be able to tell the difference but me. LOL . Beautiful. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Hoot-owl-m, This is wonderful, it always amazes me how much feeling and vividness you put in to your poetry I always enjoy them so much, thank you. Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well I'll be dagg nabbed So it's bin you parading through my dreams all this time I always awake at the wrong time and can't quite remember the dream ... except that it was a good one Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Exquisitely done. I would try and respond but would fail as a mere mortal to such heavenly expression. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Truly Wonderful Ruth! I love the expression in this one! I think I am going to have to go dig through the archives now!!!!!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"as fantasies take flight" eyes now closing, your my fantasy tonight. So nice, Hoot_Owl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cerinity, Denise and Lost Dreamer...thank you all Okay Guys...you have me blushing here, Thank you for the comments |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I am speechless...Beautiful poem seems somehow understated here..So I'll go with simply divine!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
One of your best, Hoot! Corinne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ruth, what to say...another excellent write. Marina |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Wow! I really liked this one, but are you sure this doesn't belong in the adult category? Pretty steamy stuff here! I did enjoy it immensely. David2 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is exquisite, Ruth...sensual and lovely! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cheryl, Corinne, Martie, and Marina....thank you all David...I'm glad you enjoyed it and actually it's quite a ways from needing to be posted in adult |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
WOW Hooter, You sure know how to get the heat turned up in here. Great poem and little different. I liked it though. Keep up the great work. Jfreak |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I'm so glad you reposted this!! I absolutely love it!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ GO GIRL ! It steams ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jfreak, Marge and Satiate...thank you |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hehehehehe....I knew this was in you! (love your poetry every time!) |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
simply lovely Rick |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PDV...lol, I never claimed not to be a hopeless romantic Thanks for the comment Rick...thank you |
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