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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-03-30 08:24 AM

Rainbows/halo like

Look
see there,
   up above
La Luna
  smiling down

she indeed is…..
   for her glow
surrounds only
      you, forming
an aura
projecting crystal
       rainbows
halo - like

moonbeams
floating, playfully
    dipping, you
fade and ripples
      appear over
and over

       Oh dear
    it was only
my imagination,
cemented upon these
still waters calm, it
           was me
      lost in
You.

Dark Angel
2000

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-03-30 08:55 AM

Hi Dark Angel,

Good morning, This is beautiful, La Luna smiling down that is neet I haven't heard that before.

Cerenity

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-03-30 09:27 AM

Very tranquil

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-30 10:13 AM

Ahhh, this is so beautiful!! I could picture it in my mind!

Denise

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-03-31 12:22 PM

Beautiful! I love the way you tied that up at the end....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-04-01 08:51 PM

DarkAngel~
This is beautiful.
Glad I went thumbing through
the back pages.
I like the formatting.
Very, very well done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-04-01 10:20 PM

Angel,
I feel like I am there!! Beautiful images and I just love the way you layed it out. Excellent...

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 2000-04-01 10:27 PM

Have you ever seen
those rainbows round the moon
Playful little rays
Shining round La Luna in June?

Bountiful in color
Shining just for you
And imitating a smile
and the sweet things that you do.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2000-04-01 10:47 PM

Wonderful!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2000-04-05 08:06 PM

Cerenity, thanks hon

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thanks Ruth honey

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Denise thank you so very much

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Sharon thank you Hon

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Oh marge thank you so very much

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Thank you so much Lone Wolf

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Oh Angel, your poem is so beautiful and so very thoughtful of you sweetheart. Thank you so very much.

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Kamla Thanks Hon

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 2000-04-05 10:55 PM

Anytime Angel

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