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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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REFLECTIONS Cool water flowing into my hands splashing over my hard callous palms reaching up to touch my face. Gazing into the mirror seeing eyes wide open with lust and love and imagination of things yet to be. Behind me in the reflection I see her lying drunkenly awaiting me on the bed, I wash my face and stare at a reflection of my life. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW.....powerful reflections...deeply personal and honest poerty. great emotional work. take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful and thought provoking.  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed, well written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent message, excellent imagery. Missed seeing you around here, but it's nice to have you back |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks everyone and thank you Ruth miss seeing you too. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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