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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-03-30 12:25 PM

"I get lost in your eyes"
     I'm taken to a place where the sun never rises
     and the stars always shine
"And I feel my spirits rise"
     My wings are open and I'm soaring through the air
     the earth below me without a care
"And soar like the wind"
     Carrying me away from this place that I know
     to your side so my love can show
"Is it love that I am in?"
     A love that is pure and bold and true
     this is the love that I've found with you

"I don't mind not knowing what I'm headed for"
     This is the place that I've always longed to go
     and I can't wait to see what you've got to show
"You can take me to the skies"
     To a love that's new, a love unknown
     a love that's just so easy to show
"It's like being lost in heaven"
     And when we reach that beautiful place
     we'll finally be together arm in arm and face to face
"When I am lost. . . in your eyes"
     The eyes I've searched for my whole life through
     and I'm so glad I found them in you

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-03-30 12:34 PM

Never seen such beautiful twists and added meanings to one of my favourite songs.
A gift for me at least...thanks Sven

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-03-30 01:51 AM

A beautiful version at that!

Marina

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-03-30 03:00 AM

Sven
This is a beautiful version
The words so tranquil and meaningful
Tracie

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-03-30 09:02 AM

I love the song and your take on it did it justice by far

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-03-30 10:57 PM

Sven....very nice work!! Interesting form incorporating lines from the song with your own. New love is special, isn't it?

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Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

6 posted 2000-03-30 11:01 PM

Sven, a very interesting form, as Ruth said. Quite wonderful, really.

~ Claire

CherylLynnMckee
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

7 posted 2000-03-30 11:36 PM

I think I like your version better..quite lovely!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2000-03-31 01:03 AM

In your soul is the singer of poetry...Sven this is wonderful.... just lovely..

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