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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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I laugh. I dream. I sing. I scream. Lonely Heart yearns. Mistake! Love burns! Offer Belief, Given Deceit. I ache. I cry. I hurt. I die. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Suthern, this is so very sad. I'm sure we can all relate to this cycle. Well written. Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW!!!! Powerful grouping of words...so much said with so little  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Hugs suthern ... Very powerful and sad, indeed ..... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such is the essence of life, isn't it? You've said it all, suthern..  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You sure did Mother Hen...you sure did.. Giving you a HUSG |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
whats as incredible as this poignant poem suthern??? Cindy posted on it!!! huggsZzzz to you both!!! |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
This is a great poem..nicely done! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
HUGS and HUSG .... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ok you just forgot one line...."I hug" cause somewhere in that cycle you are gonna get some serious hugs from me....lol....maybe you could just repeat it every other line hugs hugs hugs and a couple more(penitent ones)*looks really really really penitent so you won't be mad at her* |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh and I forgot a wow...great poem....I have never been able to write something that intense with so few words [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Succinct style here, a departure for you. And appropriate for the topic, too, I might add. Nicely done! Corinne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Little Chick: I'll moan more if you'll respond??? *G* Thank you very much for your comments... I appreciate all of you taking the time to read this. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sweet Suthern ((((((HUGS)))))) You summed it up in so few words my dear. I hope this don't represent your present feelings? Somehow I think they do, but I've been wrong before...if so, I'm sorry that you're feeling this way. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Stop pedaling! Oh! Not that kind of cycle? I understand, I truly do. (throw something against the wall - it helps! As long as it's not the cat!) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ Nicely stated emotions. But, let's kick that dying one ... too permanent ! You are amazing, lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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