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Searching for Wonder--Challenge #6
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Searching for Wonder--Challenge #6 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The stars glistened above a still, silent sea She walked along the shore, a woman alone Another romance ended, no one to blame but she Still searching, searching for that love not known. All she's ever wanted was someone to love Someone Wonderous to share and fill her life Someone that would be a perfect fit, like a glove And take her heart away from this strife. So now she walks alone, barefoot in the sand Searching for the one to fill the hole in her heart The healing touch of a lover's hand She will find him, and make a new start. ----------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-19-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Someone that would be a perfect fit, like a glove" ...a beautiful line...lovely poem, Sven. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Is that a promise? (you are a big, beating, heart, Sven) I treasure this... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
If it's possible to imagine Sven...I'm speechless! Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely poem, Sven. I like the rhyme and the beach theme. Speaks to me.... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Sven excellent Poem. You met this challenge with ease. Good Job The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Look what I found! A treasure! Good one..  |
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