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What Will Then Remain? |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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Cold upon my heart they lay- Those memories of you.. It seems they will not go away, No matter what I do. Your gentle touch, the sweet caress- That look, within your eye… Yet how could either of us guess- What just ahead might lie? Sorrow? Loneliness, and shame? Why! all of these and more… And who can say just who’s to blame? And who can whom abhor? “I love you”..Ah, ‘tis easy said- But harder far to keep… And when those feelings soon are dead How hard we tend to weep. The question still an answer begs- After all the pain… Is washed away by sorrows tears… Oh, what will then remain? Visit My Home Page http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
how sad and sweet... ya know? So much love there, seems to me, all hope is not yet lost... But, that could be... just the poet in me. Corinne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is pure poetry, Gunslinger, tender and touching...speaking for the heart of a woman, I am moved by this...thanx... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Gunslinger Very touching Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice gunslinger...another opportunity to love can sometimes end in disappointments and sorrow. James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slinger~ You pen from within. Longing render of regrets. Wonderful, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
GS...very nicely done poem  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching, heartfelt poem! Denise |
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