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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Autum leaves have came calling.. A hand stitched quilt falling.. The stealth snow of winter..silently crept away.. Spring tears enticing all to grow.. Seeds that were sewn..wanting nolonger to be owned.. Discontented with the ground.. Blooming with all its colors proud.. Roses with their tempting blooms.. Seductively beckoning.. The green grass throws a warm blanket across the land.. A backdrop for a kaleidascope.. Trees laden heavily with leaves..dancing with the afternoon breeze.. Gossamer webs spread between.. Droplets of dew intertwined.. Embracing all with the sunkissed mist.. Flushing virgin buds with its passionate kiss.. The sun with all its fervor.. Arousing with its tender warmth..all to come outside and play.. Fragerant aromas fill the air.. Restoration is near.. Springs supple rebirth.. Soon gives way.. To a fiery summer day.. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I have a bad case of Spring Fever after reading this. Some wonderful imagery of seasonal unfoldings. Nice writing and welcome to Passions. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cheryl, Lovely work!!!! I love the springtime, and it feels exactly as you described it. Great work! And welcome to our little family!  Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely done... I enjoyed. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Cheryl, sincere thanks from a fellow nature-lover. You make me want to break out the camping gear!  )Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions!! This is beautiful....spring is right around the corner and this makes me want to start the preperations...but living in Michigan I'm not putting away the snow gear yet...lol |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I thought i would check out you poem, 'cos you looked at mine. Imagine my surprise when i read you poem to find that it was one of the most beautiful poems i had read in a long time. It was beautiful. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cheryl, Welcome to passions. Wonderful first post. I just love the images that reading conjured up in my mind. Looking forward to more!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cheryl, welcome to Passions!! This is a wonderful poem, shows that Passion indeed knows no season. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I just wanted to say thank-you to everyone who took the time to read and reply to my poem...it means alot to me to know that people enjoyed it..And I have to say..there's so many talented people in here..its very humbling. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl, Excellent poem, Good paint, good words, good thoughts. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautifully written Cheryl welcome to passions Rex}>{{{{o> [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful entree to Passions. I have spring fever as well... I look forward to reading more of your work. Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Cheryl, You have painted on my soul a picture devine thank you, and welcome to passions. Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
It's cold and hailing here today and you have seduced me with thoughts of spring Welcome to passions |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely beautiful, Cheryl!! Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more from you! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
A good first post. While the Fall is my favorite season...Spring runs a close second. Welcome to Passions....I look forward to reading more of your work. INclan |
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