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love for a guy |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
This poem is about a time when me and my bf broke up I CRIED THE CRY OF MEMORIES. I cried that night that night when you broke my heart i cried because i thought our love could last i cried that night remabering remambering how much fun we had. i cried that night rembering the first time we kissed i cried that night realizing all we had was memories memories was all we had i cried that night realzing the meaning will be there and you will not i cried that night i cried into my pillow i cried longing for you touch longing for forgiveness i cried wishing you were here i cried until i could cry no more i cried the cry of memories. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very Good, star! Welcome to the passions family!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
WE have all been there and cried those same tears...never easy..nicely done. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Star, One of the hardest things to face in life is lost love. You at least can draw strength from the knowledge that you have a great writing talent. Great first post and welcome to Passions. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
I remember when I broke up with my boyfriend, I felt such a horrible void. If you're feeling this too, then fill that void with poetry, because this poem is great & I can't wait to read more! Welcome to Passions! The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yeah its really like that..I remember when I broke up with my girlfriend Nancy and we were together for about 2 years...and we only live a few blocks apart..and I started walking home to my house and I was crying like crazy and suddenly it started pouring down rain...raining cats and dogs..and my girlfriend pulled up in her Volkswagen and said get in James you'll get soaked...and I already was..I told her to leave me alone..and I walked home crying in the rain...sad memories...James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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