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RAM
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

0 posted 2000-03-29 06:56 PM

sweet rain returns

rich earth
long fallow
quickly claimed
sweet moisture for its own.

old seeds
long dormant
quickly found
the strength to reach for home.

embrace
of tendrils
softly framed
the whispers of a wish -

a dream
set gently
on the ground
with Winter Rain's fresh kiss.

for my poet core
Rick

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 2000-03-29 07:06 PM

This is beautiful! I enjoyed this!

Denise

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

2 posted 2000-03-29 07:07 PM

Spring is here!

Elizabeth

"He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-03-29 07:12 PM

This is so lovely RAM--I am looking forward to more...Thank you.

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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ON

4 posted 2000-03-29 07:18 PM

Very nice RAM very very nice.

Parker

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

5 posted 2000-03-29 11:05 PM

And the rains brings forth such sweet blooms,
life's many stories stored inside these rooms.

Your Core

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-03-30 08:55 AM

Oh...Love blossums again in passions and I am smiling at the flowers it produces. Lovely work, nice formatting

RAM
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

7 posted 2000-03-30 12:40 PM

Thank you Denise, Elizabeth, Parker, Serenity and Hoot

and a very special thanks to Winter blossoms,
from eager bulbs, that invented new boundaries for Spring

there are neural pathways
that your body has etched
into the memories of my cells --
charges have already
been exchanged --
chemical reactions
have already bonded us.
you are my nucleus,
my center,
my Core.

Rick

CherylLynnMckee
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

8 posted 2000-03-30 12:59 PM

Beauiful poem...makes me alomst appreciate the rain were getting now..Very lovely.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2000-03-31 12:31 PM

Lovely..we are going to have sweet spring rains tonight... this is a prelude!

RAM
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

10 posted 2000-03-31 01:38 PM

thanks Cheryl and Poet

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

11 posted 2000-03-31 05:26 PM

I love the cycle of life that plays out in the earth's gardens...you poem is wonderful!

If a flower is plucked
by some raging storm,
another bloom will be set by it’s seeds,
it’s petals will enrich the ground,
and nothing will be lost or forgotten.
In Spring new flowers will color the hills,
and from a mound
of plain, brown earth
life will return.

RAM
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

12 posted 2000-04-04 11:39 AM

thank you for your words, Martie

Rick

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