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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-03-30 04:48 AM



                    Why
            Why………A simple question
           yet no simple answer given
       why is love not able to conquer all
       why is life not fair to all involved
          why must there be pain
              heartache
         why must there be what is
           instead of what ifs
  why must fairy dust disappear with the stars
           why must tears flow
            and smiles disappear
           why must love be fleeting
        why must hearts break in two
              
                why
                why

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mete out
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1 posted 2000-03-30 05:13 AM


***eyesplus2,
So many questions, met with so few answers.
A beautiful poem, no matter how painful.
            


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.



Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-03-30 06:12 AM




This was done magnificently, a painful release from the wings of your heart. Thank you for sharing it.

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3 posted 2000-03-30 07:31 AM


Eyes~
This is lovely longing ...

'why must there be what is
          instead of what ifs'
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-03-30 09:37 AM


If you figure out the answer to that question, please let me know
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