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A lovers dream
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A lovers dream |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
As the fire fades the shadows struggle to cloak the room remaining golden fingers stretch tentatively to caress the sleeping woman through the open window a frigid breeze disturbs the curtains and the moonlight seizes it's opportunity to join the firelights embrace dancing across her skin in brilliant color... Oblivious she sleeps on fast within her dream locked in her own intimate dance within the arms of her dream lover.. Like a wonderous mystery he slips in like a tantalizing phantom capturing her every night twirling her endlessly under the stars his face unknown his name unspoken... the cool night air ruffles her sheets icey bumps rising from her flesh as she shifts sheets sliding down her arms fingertips soft and he gently removes her strap replacing it with a kiss drawing her near tasting of her pressed against him breathless she feels his need... desire sighs echo she pulls him closer taking her pillow in her arms molding herself to his strength blankets sliding between velvet perfection entangling her arching murmuring she moans softly... winters grasp invading as icey fingers slide along her face she trembles when he kisses her sliding a velvet rose into her hair warmth caresses her ear... "Tomorrow... my love" reaching for him her fingers grasping only his memory whispers fading as she awakes... sighing she stares out into the night sky with half lidded eyes Brushing at something upon her cheek she sends it into flight her eyes closing to a dreamless sleep as a tiny red petal glides quietly to the floor... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Breathe~BRAVO!!!!!!  I saw it so clear in my mind, like a memory. This is fantastic!-SEA |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
what a dream! "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
with dreams like that, who needs reality..???? Excellent job. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thank you SEA! *grin* Rosalind....more like a fantasy...  )Bobbycat...*L* There is a lot to be said for real human touch though... )Thanks.... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ This is flawlessly sensual. Such beauteous thoughts of a dream worth going to sleep for. Gal, this is just WONDERFUL ! Here's to more luscious dreams to be shared with us ! GO TO SLEEP ! NITE-NITE !  You're getting sleepy !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
This is so lovely! Like a novel you hate to put down and wish would continue until the next dream. Touched my senses, thanks! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Marge *LOL* If we could dream like that every night! None of us would EVER get out of bed...and then...who would share their poetry? And who would read it?....*grin* January flowers...I LOVE your name! )Thank you so much for your comments... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely stunning! What a dream..I especially love the ending...beautiful work! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This one went down like chocolate ice-cream. A fabulous read, sensual, pure satin... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Alwye...Why...thank you!... )serenity...chocolate ice cream? I think that has to be one of the best remarks I have had...I LOVE chocolate ice cream! *grin* Thank you! Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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