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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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He brandished foil. I, e'pee. En Guarde! Already underway at the whispher of hello. I lunge! He smiled a sweet parry. Riposte. He bowed with gallantry. Startled, I forgot to pose. I marvel at his artistry-- how easily he disarmed me-- and how I savor still, the loss. |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
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Spectacular poem, serenity! Really intense, I enjoyed it greatly!! And rock on, hun!  "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very creative vision of inspiration in this one serenity.., very cool and unique...the last line was on the mark!! may I say...touche' LOL sorry couldnt resist..  thanks for the sweetness in your relpy tonight, you always make me smile. take care jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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