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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-03-26 06:21 AM

I dedicate this heart
  of crimson
now blue
with words that
   echo unspoken
you
listen if not of
  my selfish
heart

but of
  your selfish
self

a dreamy
    wonderland
flushed and gone,
  drowned by
    stubborn souls
submerged into
nothingness

Of worthlessness
  zip-zero
and naught

this will become
      of my love
and eventually
my heart

I dedicate this
to you.

Dark Angel
2000

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-03-26 07:17 AM

Well you already know how lovely I think this is...

Wonderful A of L...

K

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

2 posted 2000-03-26 07:55 AM

Like the wings of an eagle - swift, strong and beautiful. Well done.

Moonshine.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-03-26 08:11 AM

This is lovely DA

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-03-26 08:20 AM

Ah....lately your work has such a meloncholy tone which makes it seem like it would shatter if someone touched it..lovely, DA.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-26 02:45 PM

Very melancholy yet very beautiful!

HUGS

Denise

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-03-26 06:02 PM

DA,
Lovely and beautifully put!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2000-03-26 09:17 PM

Sweet Butterfly, Moonshine,Ruth, Sharon Denise and Lone Wolf.....

I'd like to thank you all for taking the time to read this, I do appreciate it

and Thank you so very much for your lovely replies.

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

8 posted 2000-03-26 11:34 PM

Heart of glass, FRAGILE, handle with care

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