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David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2000-03-25 02:48 PM

Truth

A pleasant talk and not a hint of strain,
A dinner in a dimly lighted booth,
A quiet drive, a soft and peaceful rain,
Are simple joys enriched with simple truth.
The simple truth that love will not demand,
Or ever ask for more than it may give,
That love must only seek to understand,
And understanding, find its will to live.
Pretensions cast aside and egos tamed,
Our brilliant love in vibrant, fragrant bloom,
This hope of love is now a love enflamed,
And never wonders, worries, or presumes.

We'll cherish love that only we may share,
Our minds and bodies laced, intent, and bare.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-03-25 03:18 PM

Beautiful words...two falling in love together and it is just happening because it was meant to be. James

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2000-03-25 03:19 PM

Beautiful!! Sounds like the perfect love.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2000-03-25 06:13 PM

... and perfect love is a good thing..

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2000-03-25 07:16 PM

Nothing so beautiful as laying your mind completely bare to the one you love. beautiful poem.

michael

VampDude
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 21
Canada

5 posted 2000-03-25 07:37 PM

Nothing quite like love, eh? Great poem!

Windrider Silverbreeze
Junior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 33

6 posted 2000-03-25 08:22 PM

(In responce to truth)

The dark and the silver they both become one,
Lighting the dark,
And darkening the sun.
Filling the void neither could place.
To look at them now,
That smile on their face.
Their souls entertwined,
Perfect love ever known,
While stars shine down,
And make themselves known.
But none to these two,
Upon the world do they see.
Only the love that grows on,
For all eternity.

(Enjoy and wonderfully written poem of love)

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-03-26 02:39 PM

I absolutely love your sonnets, David! Very beautiful!

Denise

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-03-26 04:16 PM

another perfect poem from you today david...
i love your style...i think your gonna be seeing alot of me(smile)
take care, jm

Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

9 posted 2000-03-26 04:42 PM

Love is, indeed, a baring of souls caught up in life's most simple truths. What a grand and lovely piece of poetry this is.

~ Claire

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2000-03-27 10:19 AM

Oh...you do write a mean sonnet

Let me know when you're ready for those addresses

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